This is a truly beautiful line. “The hidden moons unhinged.
There’s so little time,
to extinguish the needs of the flowers.” Really makes me ponder the relevance of my thoughts. Breathes perspective into this little life of mine, not big enough to matter in the scope of universal needs.
Lovely poem, the cat in the bird fountain is top tier. 😁
lol thank you!
Breathing in the fragrance of spring is like a joyful dance, full of warmth and freedom.
This is a truly beautiful line. “The hidden moons unhinged.
There’s so little time,
to extinguish the needs of the flowers.” Really makes me ponder the relevance of my thoughts. Breathes perspective into this little life of mine, not big enough to matter in the scope of universal needs.
thank you. I'm glad you liked it.
There’s so little time,
to extinguish the needs of the flowers.
Breathtaking!
thank you Kelly!
Welcome, Stephen. The comment is more than well deserved. Beautiful poem!
This is really temporal and fantastic. You put your finger on something that is moving.
thank you! I've been enjoying your live reading
KITTY IN THE BIRDBATH
haha yes.
Such beauty, as always! The ending hits because it treats letting go not as collapse, but as a quiet, intelligent kind of freedom.
thank you Stacey! if anything deserves a fresh take it's spring the symbol of freshness lol
You’ve caught the essence, cuing the “art of no self control.” Wonderful!
thanks Nora. I hesitate to write about what's been said. who can add to the library of spring or love poems! but this one happened hah. and thank you!
Who can ever tire of spring or love? Or the telling!
Wonderful. Could almost feel each of my senses responding to it. Beautiful.
thank you Gary!
Again, the season of Spring has come
and a spring-source rises under everything,
a moon sliding from the shadows.
- Rumi
beautiful! thank you